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Thursday, 1 February 2018

My Bio Poem

Today in the the kia manawanui syndicate we made our own bio poems here is one I made it was funny and cool and it was the first time that I ever made a bio poem before and I feel like i did good for a first timer.Here is my bio poem hope you enjoy and comment below.


2 comments:

  1. Hello Stephney,
    You've done a great job and there is some funny information about you but I found some mistakes in you bio poem like where it says 'I need a new bike because mine is broken.' there is a full stop after broken and after the full stop you wrote I need activites... without a space between the full stop after broken and I need. I also found that you put to many ands in the 2nd paragraph so I wanted to let you know for next time you blog something but I think you've done a great job, keep it up.

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  2. Thank you Hevani,
    Thanks for giving me advice for next time

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