Today our teacher asked us to write a story about a picture.This what I wrote. Tell me what you think in the comments below.
The wind rushed through her hair as she descended the mountain at great speed. For most children this will be an exhilarating, even terrifying experience, but for lucy it was an ordinary journey to school…
Lucy’s house was in a humongous forest and her house was built upon giant bugs. Her house is like no other house. Her house was filled amazing animals and birds just outside the forest were she lives in is a tropical beach.
Lucy’s school is filled with extraordinary pictures she is a year 11 and is born with the most smartest abilities. She has moved a lot of year levels and is filled
Her school is not similar from mine, I think she learns about way different things from me and I think she was the one who made the zip line for herself to travel to school.
This girl feels fine like as if it was a nice ordinary walk to school but instead she’s traveling by zip line, I think she feels relaxed and unstressed. The wind was roaring in her air as she swooshed through the forest on her zip line.
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The picture we used to freestyle write was this picture....
You could have a try and write a freestyle writing on this picture or your own picture.
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