This week we read the text of "The Desert Kaupoi" which was written by Ariana Tikao.A key idea of this text is Bravery. An example of Bravery was when a friend of John, McDonald got shot in the arm and his arm came of, with his mighty bravery he picked up his arm and threw it at the machine guns.
Another key idea in this text is Heroism. An example of Heroism is when the many brave and strong soldiers volunteered to sacrifice their lives to fight for there country.
My last key idea from this text is determination. An example of determination is when the soldiers were able to stay a soldier and to not back out. All the soldiers that volunteered knew that they there was going to be a possibility that they were going to die but they knew they were going to die fighting for there country.
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